Bonejangles II

Crit: The pinky on his left hand is too large. There should be less lines on the items that are farther away to give them a "lighter" feel, or at least give the items in the foreground more contrast by doing multiple passes of hatching. It would serve him well to have much thicker lines on the bottoms of his face and arms, giving the character a sense of "weight." There should also be a small white outline inside the black eye to make it seem as if it is just the inside of the skull that you are seeing and not an eyepatch.
Gush: Very nice hatching, and I like the goofy jaw and hat. I'm actually digging your black and white drawings a lot, and in the future you should focus more on your color studies. If you can master both, you'll really be a force to be reckoned with.